Monday, 14 April 2014

L for Love!!

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He touched my heart,
And left his mark forever!
My eyes still search for him,
Whenever he isn't near!

Looks of a fallen angel,
And eyes of a hypnotist!
Just a smile is what it took,
To make my heart tender!

His fingers so slender,
Yet they seem so gentle!
Whenever they play the melody,
I completely surrender!

What is this sweet feeling?
I wonder by myself.
What else could it ever be?
Its magical, it has to be love!

I take a deep breath as I inch forward
Just a touch to make sure it was all real!
It wasn't needed, mom’s voice came by,
Wake up, you are late already!


PS: Linking this post to the A-Z Challenge 2014 and Ultimate Blog Challenge April 2014.



Until the next post,
Keep smiling :)

Love, 
Swathi :)

30 comments:

  1. Ah!! A love poem!! Lovely.. and the twist in the end.. happens all the time!! :P

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  2. Beautiful!! :)

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  3. Very cute poem on love.Why do moms/ alarms disrupt such sweet dreams!!

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  4. Haha :) Sweet girl, dreaming of love, but college beckons :D :D Wait, you will get to see the rest of the dream soon !!
    Jokes apart, lovely poem, Swathi :) loved the way you've woven through the dream :)

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  5. Hahahahaha wat a lovely dream,,, happens this ,,,, wish ur mom wudnt hv woke u up,,,,,, it wud b fun reading the next part of ur dreamy boys stry ! Well I knw who it is lee min hoo!:-P;-)

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  6. Bet she didn't want to be woken from that dream. :-)
    Deb@ http://debioneille.blogspot.com

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  7. Haha why did she have to wake her up? Grrrrr!

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  8. Dreams interrupted by dreadful reality...such is life : ) Surprise endings are fun!

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  9. Reminds me of that popular Baazigar song.. Mere khwabon mein :)

    PhenoMenon
    http://throodalookingglass.com/2014/04/lamp-light/

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  10. Nice and romantic dream...broken by hard realities-I would say :-(.

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  11. Oooh! Dreams of that perfect love!!! :)

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  12. There are two kinds of people in this world,
    hopeless romantics and realists. :P

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  13. Beautiful, romantic take on L :) And sometimes, the dreams are worth looking forward to ;)

    ~Shailaja's latest A~Z post

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  14. Lovely poem. Thoughtful and sweet.

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  15. Ah, I hope the dream comes true. :)

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  16. This reminds me of my first love and dreams I use to have about him <3
    Amazingly written!

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  17. Wonder what would have happened had mommy not woken her up :) Lovely poem

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  18. Dreams?? Athos... Wow yaar... ek dum mast hai.. Porthos khush hui

    ~S(t)ri
    Participant|AtoZ Challenge 2014
    Smile, it makes (y)our day!

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  19. That was a romantic one. If only Mom had not called at that exact moment ;)

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  20. Dreamy dreamy poetry ...I wish mom hadn't woke her up :) oops she would have been late ;)

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  21. I love these dreams :) beautiful write.

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  22. What a great twist! I didn't realize till the end that this was a dream.

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  23. Nicely woven.... Love and dreams, they form the endearing twins...

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  24. i bet it wasn't just a dream...!! :) :)

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  25. Amazing write, Swati.. Loved it! :)

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