He looked at me with twinkling eyes that displayed his longing.
The look in his eyes told he was completely dazzled and would definitely come back for me.
I was happy; finally I had found someone who loved me.
The wait seemed to end when he came back again after a week, smiling triumphantly like he has been waiting for this moment too.
"Show me the latest model Bhaiyya" he said and I watched enviously as the shopkeeper picked up the S5, while the boy eyed it with the same love he had for me, the S4, few days back!
PS: Linking this post to Five Sentence Fiction - Dazzles, Ultimate Blog Challenge July 2014 and NaBloPoMo
Until the next post,
Keep Smiling :)
Love,
Swathi :)
finally found u :p
ReplyDeleteBt for how long :P
DeleteAah! Poor S4!! That's a fab twist, Swathi. Didnt see it coming :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa :) Ya poor s4... I don't mind buying it ;)
DeleteHa, you had me!
ReplyDelete:D *Happy*
DeletePoor phone! Lovely Swathi. Nice take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThanks Reema :)
DeleteThe S4 must have felt so cheated! We really have stopped being loyal to our constant companions these days ;)
ReplyDeleteGood one Swati :)
But the new models will be so awesome! What to do ;)
DeleteThanks Vinodini :)
Nice twist and good articulation, Good writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Nayna :)
DeleteLiked the twist. Men! Love the phone more than the girl! That just isn't right! HA HA
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy! You are right, but who will make them understand this :P
DeleteUnexpected - I love it! Thanks for sharing. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Laurel :) Glad you liked it :)
DeleteHehehe :D I know. But technology changes every day. Sad. Even an S4 is out of my budget, so the S5 is out of the question. :P
ReplyDeleteMine too :( So even if someone gets me s4, I will be more happy than the person owning S5 :D
DeleteI loved it.... esp the twist :)
ReplyDeleteAm glad Sheethal :) Thanks for dropping by :)
DeleteOh this love-craze for new gizmos and gadgets ;)
ReplyDeleteAlmost all of us have this craze, isn't it? ;)
DeleteAww the craze for new phones. Soon S5 will have another rival and your friend will fall in love again!
ReplyDeleteThat's so true ma'am :) This falling in love is a never ending process especially with new gadgets :D
Deletehehehe guys and gadgets :D loved the twist at the end :D
ReplyDeleteAm glad you loved it Rajlakshmi :)
DeleteSUCH A TRAITOR!1 :P
ReplyDeletehaha this was funny!
Traitor he is! :P Thanks Red :)
DeleteThat person is sooo me!! :D
ReplyDeleteHahah this was awesome swathiii :p
ReplyDeleteThanks Sabeeha :)
DeleteHahha... now that was a very nice post. I like the twist
ReplyDeleteTina from The Sunny Side of Life
Thanks Tina :) Glad you liked it :)
DeleteGood one Swathi
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteNice twist Swathi. enjoyed this one.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it Suzy :) Thanks!
DeleteThis, I can relate to ;) I have had 5 phones in 5 years. I bet all my old phones feel this way ;)
ReplyDelete5 phones in 5 years :O you know ma'am, it hasnt been 5 years since i started using mobiles!
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