He wanders in the dark,
Alone in the secluded park.
Gliding quietly like the mist,
Looking out for his tryst.
Eyes shining in the moon light,
As they scan through the night.
A pale smile crosses his face,
Adding more charm to his grace.
In the hunt he was immersed,
Waiting for quenching his thirst.
Watching out intently for the prey,
The predator's eyes never looking away!
He grabs the passerby in a sec,
Piercing right through her neck!
He sinks his fangs in her vein,
And enjoys as she withers in pain.
As he licks away the blood that drips,
A smile adorns his beautiful lips.
Hiding his fangs behind that smile,
The dark one glides away in style.
PS: Linking this post to Poetry Jam - Thirst, the Ultimate Blog Challenge July 2014 and NaBloPoMo.
Until the next post,
Keep Smiling :)
Love,
Swathi :)
vampires :) poem describes everything about vampires :) good one swatz :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sachin :)
DeleteA vamp poem? :) Now that's different. Love the rhyme.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leo :-) am glad you loved it :-)
Deleteooohhh!! a poem on vampires! ofcourse i loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteHehe telme nibhz do u love vampires.. is this one of our sync moments ;-)
DeleteSuch a comprehensive poem on vampires. Really liked it.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Inderpreet :-)
DeleteThat's was a good take on "thirst". Loved your description :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Soumyaa :-)
DeleteWow!! Brilliant! I'm reading a poem on vampires for the first time and it has blown my mind away :)
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Thats a big compliment for me shalz :-) Thanks a lot :-)
DeleteScary and wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Laurie :-)
DeleteScary and a fun take on vampires. I enjoyed it.
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I am glad you enjoyed it Cathy :-)
Deleteha. def a unique take on the prompt....but the vampire does know the thirst....part of his curse....i imagine quite intoxicating as well...
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian :-) Oh I bet it will be intoxicating :-D
Deletei dont like vamp !.. nice poem though :)
ReplyDeleteThanks ankur :-) btw I love vampires :-D
DeleteThis is quite an original take on the prompt. Very craftily penned!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Gabriella :-)
DeleteThis gives me the chills...which means it is definitely an effective poem.
ReplyDeleteThat made my day mary! Thanks a lot :-)
DeleteBrrr! That sent shivers down my spine!!
ReplyDeleteAnd I read it just before going to sleep! Vampires give me the creeps and this poem did too!
Oops! Bad timing? ;-) no need to be scared hema.. there are good vampires too :-D
DeleteVampire? That's cool.
ReplyDeleteThanks SG :-D
Deletehehe he does glyde away in style. Sexy vampires :P
ReplyDeleteIsnt it how they are described most of the times ;-)
DeleteDamn!!! I never really likes vampires :-/
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DeleteOh!! Our tastes differ a lot then :-P
DeleteOh wow! Something different! True for all what you have said about vampires. I love watching Vampire Diaries BTW. I think you also should if you don't. That would give you some more ideas to write on them :p
ReplyDeleteThank you Umang :) and I love TVD :) I do watch it and Damon is my favourite ;)
Deletei had never read a poem about vampires and this one is so interesting and lovely!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Ankita :)
DeleteVampires have never sounded so romantic. Well done.
ReplyDeleteOh Gail thanks a ton :) That means a lot :)
DeleteReading a poem on vampires for the first time. Love it! :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you loved it Pooja :)
DeleteHello! Interesting, I drafted a few lines on Zombie last morning and now I read one on Vampire :) Nicely written :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :) Now we just have to find someone who wrote about werewolves ;) and the circle would be complete :D
Deleteouch...poor lass...a lovely :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :)
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ReplyDeleteOh my too gory and scary. But nicely written.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Suzy :)
Deleteoh.you .scary one but you have created a nice suspense too.very nice:)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Arathi :)
DeleteI was right. Description is your forte! Well crafted, Swathi!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot ma'am :) I will work more on this and make it my strength :)
DeleteWooha! Simply awesome! Vampires are always a great source of inspiration, aren't they? If you like the topic, you will surely know Baudelaire's poem: "The Vampire". I love this take on the prompt you have made!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Minerva :) No I haven't read that poem, I have only read stories of vampires so far. But now will check the poem :) Thanks again :)
DeleteVampires! An interesting read, thank you for that.
ReplyDeleteSurfed on here from poetry jam, will come back to comment further when it is not 1 in the morning where I am. Brrr.
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