Saturday 22 March 2014

RUINS - FIVE SENTENCE FICTION #2

       "This is just a piece of junk dear!", said her hubby looking at the old bicycle that once belonged to her father.

       All the images of her childhood started flashing before her eyes, where this bicycle, which lay in its ruins now due to the recent accident, was a prized possession to her dad.

       "When we can buy a brand new two wheeler now, I don't understand why you still want to hold on to this", he said, not even once understanding how much that bicycle meant to her.

       She slowly went near the it, remembering all those difficulties they had faced to buy it, all those errands they had made for selling things, by going house to house, to meet their daily requirements and all those memories which were more than mere money!

       Taking in a deep breath and wiping away the tear that had escaped her eyes, she slowly said, "I wouldn't sell this, not even if someone offers me a million, because even in it ruins, this is still my most valuable treasure!"

image source: www.zombiezodiac.com

PS: This post is written for Five Sentence Fiction and the prompt word this week is RUINS.

26 comments:

  1. Good one !!! :) Love the image.. :)

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    1. Trust the photographer to come up with this line :D
      Thanks Shyam :)

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  2. bikes and boys... beautiful tale :)

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  3. Beauty [and worth in this case] is in the eyes of the beholder. Nicely done. Vivid.

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    1. Truly said Robin :) Thanks :) Keep visiting :)

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  4. There are some things far too precious for money to buy, or replace.

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  5. awesome ............ love this story :)

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  6. I know how it feels :) thats what i said for my cycle :) touching !:)

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  7. Wonderful, meaningful story.
    Here is mine: http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2014/03/ruins.html

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  8. Amazing story. I always have soft corner for bikes.

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