Wednesday 22 April 2015

Second Chance

My theme for this year's A to Z Challenge is A Reader's Take, where everyday I will be picking out a novel title corresponding to that day's letter and write my post based on it. To make it more challenging, I have decided to write a serial story. The novel I have selected for today is 'Second Chance'

Leave Me Never

Chapter 19

(Find the series index here)

Ayaan couldn't believe his ears when two days later Jason called him to update about the case. Not only had he found Kayra, he had got her contact details as well. He was tempted to call her immediately but then, he didn't know how she would react. And some things were better discussed face to face. He wanted to see her expression when she saw him after all these years. He wanted to see that shy smile that made his heart skip a beat. He wanted to see the twinkle in her eyes when she laughed at his lame jokes and those eyebrows which appeared to be knit together when she was trying hard to concentrate. Oh, how he missed her!

Without wasting much time, Ayaan put his things together and started with the journey. Life had given him a second chance and he wasn’t going to miss it. It was early in the morning and he would reach Bangalore by evening if he drove without stopping much. His heart thudded with excitement. It was like he was in college all over again, when he first had crush on Kayra. Encountering the sweet memories, Ayaan drove, his excitement increasing with each mile he closed.

It was 5pm when he reached his destination. The thought of seeing Kayra after all these years made him giddy with excitement. Questions started buzzing in his mind - What will she say when she saw him? How would she react? Well he would find out soon. Just when he was about to get down, he saw a kid in school uniforms entering the house. Doubts started creeping in his mind. Was this where Kayra lived or had she moved? Was the girl tricking Jason when she gave the address? Or worse, had she move on with life? A dark feeling started creeping up on him as he thought about that. He didn't have to wait long. He got his answers the very next instant. A car stopped in front of the house and Kayra stepped out from it. She still looked beautiful, or maybe more. His heart did a small somersault upon seeing her. But it didn't take it long for the joy to fade. A guy came out of the other door and stood beside her. He put her arms around her and they started walking towards the house. As she opened the gate, the boy in the uniform came out running and hugged her saying ‘Mumma’.

Ayaan felt the ground beneath him sink. Breathing became difficult. How could he have assumed that Kayra would be waiting for him still? Hadn't he runaway last time? It was natural for her to move on. And there he was, like a fool, searching for her. Ayaan forced his eyes away from the scene that was enfolding before his eyes and fumbled with his car key. He needed to get away from this place and he needed to do that fast! After two failed attempts, he succeeded in starting the car and just when he was about to drive away, she turned and looked in his direction.


To be continued...

About today's novel: Second Chance is a novel by Jane Green. Read more about the book here.

PS: Linking this post to A to Z Challenge 2015. If you are participating too, please leave a link to your blog in the comments, so that I can visit you :)


Until the next post,
Keep Smiling :)

Love,
Swathi :)

21 comments:

  1. Oh I hope she sees him and stops him. It would break my heart if he leaves because of a silly misunderstanding after all these years.
    *Shantala @ ShanayaTales*

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  2. ohh no no no... please don't let him get away!!! you really know how to stop a reader's heart :P

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  3. oho I hope the misunderstanding clears soon. The both belong together. BTW Jane Green is one of my favorite authors :)

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  4. Aiyooooo...why did you have to change tracks now? Grrrrr

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  5. Nooooooo, wait ayaan!!!! Oh this is getting unbearable.... hope there will be a secondsecond chance for sure...

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  6. Ahhh what a place to stop the story! You are mean :P

    I hope tomorrow comes soon :D

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  7. Noooo... Don't go!!
    I wish they meet....

    Good going Swathi! :)

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  8. Oh please don't go away..... that's so fascinating Swathi. Just when they were going to get together... OMG! When oh when????
    April 30 I suppose ;)

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  9. Oh what's happening! Let her see him and stop him.

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  10. I hope they don't walk away from each other - at least clear up a misunderstanding.

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  11. Omg omg, don't leave me hanging like that! I SO want them to have their happy ending!
    My link: http://www.devikafernando.com/blog/blogging-from-a-to-z-challenge-letter-s-soul-mate

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  12. Wow..what an end..!!!
    Waiting for tomorrow..

    Cheers

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  13. Wow...how you are keeping us hooked! Fantastic!

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  14. Oh! You ended the chapter at such a crucial juncture! Waiting for the next chapter now :)

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  15. I had my heart in my throat near the beginning instinctively sensing that this was not going to end well: I was right and wished I was wrong! Please change this to a happy ending! ;) <3

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  16. ...give them both a second chance! You will, won't you? For us readers at least! ;) <3

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  17. It feels as if I'm watching my favourite movie and when it gets to the best scene someone switches the T.V off :D

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  18. oh no..don't jump to conclusions!! wait!!

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  19. She did turn his way...yes she did. I just hope he gets a second chance :) Lovely writing :)

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  20. Yes! Thank God she saw him! I love the quote at the end :)

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