My theme for this year's A to Z Challenge is A Reader's Take, where everyday I will be picking out a novel title corresponding to that day's letter and write my post based on it. To make it more challenging, I have decided to write a serial story. The novel I have selected for today is 'Few Things Left Unsaid'.
Leave Me Never
Chapter 6
(Read the previous chapter here)
Shruthi saw Kayra
leaving and her guilt knew no bound. She so wished she could go and hug her
best friend and say her it will be fine. She wanted to tell her that she didn't
mean it when she had called her a lying b***h. She knew Kayra was telling the
truth and she wanted to tell her that she believed her words. How could she
have let their friendship die? She still remembered the happy moments they had
spent together. Being neighbors, they had always looked out for each other,
until now, when Shruthi had refused to help Kayra. Did Kayra understand that it
was her helplessness or did she think her friend was heartless? There was no
way to find out, now that Kayra was leaving.
Shruthi quickly
composed a text to her brother, informing about Kayra’s departure to Bangalore.
She felt uneasy doing that. But what choice did she have? First, to find out
about what had happened and then having to choose her brother over Kayra and stand
by his side as his ally! It felt absurd. She knew she was doing wrong by
covering up the truth. But she couldn't abandon him either, knowing how much
their mother loved him. The woman had always loved him more than her. 'My Son' she used to say proudly and leave Shruthi deprived of her love and attention most of the times. And the poor woman was now paying for it by fighting the battle with
life. No, Shruthi didn't wish it upon her. She, in fact, wished she could ease her mother's sufferings. Finding out Sameer's truth would only make matters worse for her. Shruthi
sighed. She really had no other way out of this mess. There was so much she
wanted to say but in the end, she decided to leave them unsaid.
To be continued...
About today's novel: Few Things Left Unsaid is a novel by Sudeep Nagarkar. Aditya is a confused soul. He is unclear about his ambitions or goals in life. He hates engineering from the core of his heart, but destiny has other plans for him as he ends up in an engineering college despite his wishes. Aditya's search for true love comes to a halt when he runs into Riya, a fellow college student. Just when things are going great between the two, an unexpected tragedy strikes. Will their love be able to fight against all odds? An uplifting story about finding and losing love, Few Things Left Unsaid is sure to tug at your heartstrings.
PS: Linking this post to A to Z Challenge 2015.
Until the next post,
Keep Smiling :)
Love,
Swathi :)
This is developing nicely, Swathi :) Though I wonder why the censoring was needed in the post.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinay :) The censoring is done so that I can reveal it at a later stage ;) But you found out already haan?
DeletePoor Shruti and Kayra...a tussle between friendship and family is hard :)
ReplyDeleteTrue Sulekha! It always is!
DeleteLoved the quote in the end. This story is shaping out great.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinodini :)
DeleteWay to go, Swathi.
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinitha :)
DeleteThere is so many secrets to unravel! And you are developing the story beautifully. I guess, in some time I will be reading a novel from you which would be a bestseller :) Good luck!
ReplyDeleteAh!! This comment of yours made my day. I hope that happens in reality :)
DeleteThe story is shaping beautifully. And loving the new characters that you are introducing. Shruthi sounds like a nice girl caught in Catch-22 situation :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Prasanna :) Yeah, something like that ;)
DeleteI love the way this story is going. Definitely hooked. And you're right, some things are better left unsaid...
ReplyDeleteI am so happy that you love it Devika :) Keep coming back for more :)
DeleteSwathi, I'm guessing something, but I won't reveal it... I'll come back tomorrow... :)
ReplyDeleteGood girl ;) Tell me once I write about it, whether your guess was the same
DeleteThere's so much actually unsaid here! the mystery is getting deeper and I can't wait to know what's going to happen next!!
ReplyDeleteYay :) Keep visiting titli :)
DeleteSwathi, you sure know how to build up the suspense. A-Z posts are helping you along. LOL
ReplyDeleteI am dying of curiosity ;) Good job
:) :) *Basking in the praise* :) I will try to keep this going in the same way :) Thank you so much Sundari :)
DeleteOh this is getting better and better by the day :)
ReplyDeleteYay :) Thanks Soumya :)
DeleteIt takes courage to stay mum in such situations. To say or not to say...that's the question!
ReplyDeleteYes Lata. And that's a very difficult question indeed!
DeleteNow the suspense is getting bigger! I want it broken the next post itself! :(
ReplyDeleteNext post is too soon for it Malavikka ;)
DeleteThe continuation is so much fun and interesting.... keep posting!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Ruchi :)
DeleteInteresting story. Thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteThans Mary :)
DeleteSad that a friendship is about to be ruined. Or is it??!!
ReplyDeleteThat remains to be seen ;)
DeleteYou sure have a way of keeping readers hooked, Swathi. The story is shaping up so beautifully!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Aathira :)
DeleteIt just takes an instant to ruin a friendship, na?
ReplyDeleteSadly, yes :(
Deletethe twists arrogating intense... waiting for more
ReplyDelete:) Keep visiting Raji :)
DeleteGreat twists and turns Swathi. I'm enjoying this series.
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Thank you :) Glad you are enjoying Sanch :)
DeleteGood one Swathi! It's getting more and more interesting :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Parul :)
DeleteThis story is progressing well. I liked the Shruti/Naina angle that was introduced.Makes so much sense now.
ReplyDelete*Shantala @ ShanayaTales*
Thanks Shantala :)
DeleteHm, hope the friends will reconnect... Will stay tuned - this is getting interesting:-)
ReplyDeleteGlad you find it interesting Eli :) Keep visiting :)
DeleteI wish things work out between them again. Mystery is all around.....
ReplyDelete*Fingers crossed* ;)
DeleteThe quote in the end is simply terrific.. and the connection between friends and then getting apart.. it's not good.. I just hope they get along later..
ReplyDeleteCheers
That we will have to see ;) But i hope too tht things will work out :)
DeleteBlood is thicker than water, eh? Girl, you're rocking this!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Corinne ^_^
DeleteAll the characters are nicely woven into the plot. Looks like they are part of something big which will just rock their worlds. :)
ReplyDeleteSomething like that ;) Thanks EM :)
DeleteMystery deepens! Hopping over to the next chapter!
ReplyDeleteHope you will like it :)
DeleteI love how each chapter is complementing the next .... gripping narrative :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Amrit :)
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