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He
touched my heart,
And
left his mark forever!
My
eyes still search for him,
Whenever
he isn't near!
Looks
of a fallen angel,
And
eyes of a hypnotist!
Just
a smile is what it took,
To
make my heart tender!
His
fingers so slender,
Yet
they seem so gentle!
Whenever
they play the melody,
I
completely surrender!
What
is this sweet feeling?
I
wonder by myself.
What
else could it ever be?
Its
magical, it has to be love!
I
take a deep breath as I inch forward
Just
a touch to make sure it was all real!
It
wasn't needed, mom’s voice came by,
Wake
up, you are late already!
PS: Linking this post to the A-Z Challenge 2014 and Ultimate Blog Challenge April 2014.
Ah!! A love poem!! Lovely.. and the twist in the end.. happens all the time!! :P
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!! :)
ReplyDeleteVery cute poem on love.Why do moms/ alarms disrupt such sweet dreams!!
ReplyDeleteHaha :) Sweet girl, dreaming of love, but college beckons :D :D Wait, you will get to see the rest of the dream soon !!
ReplyDeleteJokes apart, lovely poem, Swathi :) loved the way you've woven through the dream :)
Hahahahaha wat a lovely dream,,, happens this ,,,, wish ur mom wudnt hv woke u up,,,,,, it wud b fun reading the next part of ur dreamy boys stry ! Well I knw who it is lee min hoo!:-P;-)
ReplyDeleteBet she didn't want to be woken from that dream. :-)
ReplyDeleteDeb@ http://debioneille.blogspot.com
Haha why did she have to wake her up? Grrrrr!
ReplyDeleteDreams interrupted by dreadful reality...such is life : ) Surprise endings are fun!
ReplyDeleteReminds me of that popular Baazigar song.. Mere khwabon mein :)
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Nice and romantic dream...broken by hard realities-I would say :-(.
ReplyDeleteOooh! Dreams of that perfect love!!! :)
ReplyDeleteThere are two kinds of people in this world,
ReplyDeletehopeless romantics and realists. :P
Beautiful, romantic take on L :) And sometimes, the dreams are worth looking forward to ;)
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Lovely poem. Thoughtful and sweet.
ReplyDeleteOh dreams! They make life surreal!
ReplyDeleteL for loved-Random Thoughts Naba
Ah, I hope the dream comes true. :)
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of my first love and dreams I use to have about him <3
ReplyDeleteAmazingly written!
Wonder what would have happened had mommy not woken her up :) Lovely poem
ReplyDeleteDreams?? Athos... Wow yaar... ek dum mast hai.. Porthos khush hui
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Smile, it makes (y)our day!
That was a romantic one. If only Mom had not called at that exact moment ;)
ReplyDeleteDreamy dreamy poetry ...I wish mom hadn't woke her up :) oops she would have been late ;)
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful- wow!
ReplyDeleteI love these dreams :) beautiful write.
ReplyDeleteHaa our moms know better ;)
ReplyDeleteWhat a great twist! I didn't realize till the end that this was a dream.
ReplyDeleteNicely woven.... Love and dreams, they form the endearing twins...
ReplyDeletei bet it wasn't just a dream...!! :) :)
ReplyDeleteLove the love poem Swati :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing write, Swati.. Loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteromantic ^_^
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