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The
world seems bright,
And
everything nice!
You
want to try things,
But
fear stops thy!
Dreams
beckon you,
To
move ahead in life!
But
you can’t do that,
'Coz
fear holds you back!
What
if people laugh?
What
if I fail?
Fears
and doubts like that,
Stop you from prevail!
You
watch people succeed,
And
wish to be like them!
Not
realizing even once,
That
you could be even more!
Time
doesn't wait for you,
It
keeps ticking away.
And
when you realize this
It
would already be late!
Stop
surrendering to your fears,
Face
Everything And Rise!
Or
the only option left will be
To
Fear Everything And Run!!
Until the next post,
Keep Smiling :)
Love,
Swathi :)
Powerful fearless poetry ..loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteBingo Athos!! :) I too wrote something around the same topic!!
ReplyDeleteI loved the poetry, often fear stops us from achieving the heights we deserve!
That's true aramis!
DeleteThat's right... Be fearless... Inpsiring words
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteAwesome words to startthe week by.
ReplyDeleteThanks Fred :)
DeleteVery Inspiring.. Even mine is similar
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteWhoa a poem abt fear. Mine is too though on a different line
ReplyDeletePhenoMenon
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wil stop by definitely :)
DeleteGreat poem, thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteThanks Andrew :)
Delete"Time doesn't wait for you " ..... I so love that sentence... We need to be reminded sometimes. I loved your powerful piece today! Well written! Yes, to face fear and live life as we want it is so important..
ReplyDeleteThank you Eli :) Am glad u loved it :)
DeleteWhat if people laugh?
ReplyDeleteWhat if I fail?
Fears and doubts like that,
Stop you from prevail!
LOVE THIS LINE :)
good one Swathi!
Thanks Ananya :)
DeleteI loved this. It is so true and we have to keep that forefront in our thoughts, when they try to turn negative.
ReplyDeleteTrue Carol! Thank u :)
DeleteF E A R = False Evidence Appearing Real!
ReplyDeleteVery nice F post, Swathi!
Thank you for visiting my blog!
Thank you ma'am :)
DeleteLoved the last stanza! I have something similar which I follow: Follow the Master, Face the Devil, Fight to the End :)
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Ah that's a good one! Thank you for sharing :)
DeleteLovely take, Swathi... Fear holds us back always ! The real test is not the fear itself but the conquest of the same !
ReplyDeleteSreeja Praveen
well said sreeja :) Thank you :)
DeleteVery nice poem indeed on Fear. We should not be afraid of the fear...
ReplyDeleteThanks Jayanta ji :)
Deleteso inspiring swatz :) u r emerging as a poet ^_^ so happy n proud to be a frn ^_^
ReplyDeleteStop surrendering to your fears,
Face Everything And Rise!
this made me think abt swami vivekananda :D
keep writing :)
Wow!! Now that's a huge compliment and it made my day! Thank you for the support :)
DeleteOh yes Fearless is the way forward...My favorite lines!
ReplyDeleteStop surrendering to your fears,
Face Everything And Rise!
Or the only option left will be
To Fear Everything And Run!!
Random Thoughts Naba
Thanks Naba :)
DeleteVery few of us realize this Swathi. Your generation needs to imbibe this - for a stronger self, stronger world and stronger India..
ReplyDeleteTime doesn't wait for you,
It keeps ticking away.
And when you realize this
It would already be late!
Loved these lines.
Yes Arpita! Its indeed essential to overcome our fears! Thanks for stopping by :)
Deleteover coming fear is first step towards success ..... :) love this one :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome Athos!!! *envious* you have penned it brilliantly!
ReplyDelete~S(t)ri
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Smile, it makes (y)our day!
The idiom lady who has every one hooked on her blog novel is envious!! I take it as a biiiig compliment porthos :)
DeleteGood one!
ReplyDeleteSo true - as a kid I always believed I was capable of doing anything anyone else could do. I'm not so egotistical now, but never let fear get in the way of an adventure. http://momdiary.blogspot.dk/
ReplyDeleteconfidence and ego has a very thin line in between! While its good to believe in ourselves, its better to keep the ego in check! Thanks for stopping by Ida :)
DeleteThis was beautiful- you have a wonderful way with words! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Sophie :)
DeleteBeautiful poem... Amazing, Swathi.. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you shalini :)
DeleteHii swatz :) I love ur blog :)
ReplyDeleteWould like to give the Sunshine Award.. Hope u will accept it :)
http://jrnywithprabhu.blogspot.in/2014/04/my-first-blog-award-sunshine-award.html
:)
Thank you :) Yeah I accepted it ;)
DeleteHi there - Just have to fight through the fear sometimes and take chances. Good luck with the rest of the A -Z Challenge. Didn't know about the Ultimate Blog Challenge. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Diane! UBC just requires you to write for the 4 sundays too which are off for the a-z challenge :) 30 post a month!
DeleteVery nice poem, Swathi! It is a great start to my writing filled day! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteFondly,
Elizabeth
Thanks Elizabeth :) Am glad :)
Delete"Stop surrendering to your fears, Face Everything And Rise!".. Very inspiring and a good expression!
ReplyDeleteThank you Shilpa :)
DeleteThis is a good poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Nick :)
DeleteIn fact use that very fear to plan better to conquer the negative thoughts :-)
ReplyDeleteRicha
Rightly said Richa :)
DeleteSuch a nice poem... My theme is so similar and in fact I wrote on Fear today.
ReplyDeleteTina from The Sunny Side of Life
Will drop by Tina :) Thank u :)
DeleteVery nice poem, Swathi.
ReplyDeleteThat sounded so like me.... from the past!
ReplyDeleteThat means you have overcome your fears now! Cheers :)
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