Friday, 14 March 2014

LUCKY - FIVE SENTENCE FICTION #1


"But this is not the latest model" I cried when my dad bought me a new smartphone for I wanted the best.

 How much had I wanted to be the first one to buy the latest smartphone that had just arrived in the market and flaunt it in front of my friends.

 I walked out dejected wanting to be alone for sometime, to nurse my wounded heart.

 That's when I saw two children, one of them handicapped, both crying out of hunger and begging for alms.

 A lump formed in my throat when I realized how lucky I was to have been blessed with comforts of life and decided to overlook just the material comforts to be happy in life.
                                     image source :  blogs.gonomad.com
PS: This post is written for Five Sentence Fiction word prompt which required to write a five sentence story based on the prompt word LUCKY.

 Until the next post,
Keep Smiling :)

 Love,
Swathi :)
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14 comments:

  1. Sachin Prabhu15 March 2014 at 01:13

    that's a nice thought :) yea we are lucky ! situations like these makes us realize be happy with what u have! ur lifestyle maybe someone's else dream!

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    1. Swathi Shenoy15 March 2014 at 16:35

      Yeah Sachin.. U r ryt :) Thanks for reading :)

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  2. Anonymous15 March 2014 at 07:14

    So true. I find myself thinking my own children are spoiled and don't realize the luck they really have.

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    1. Swathi Shenoy15 March 2014 at 16:37

      Time is the greatest teacher! Am sure they will soon realize how lucky they are for everything they have :) Thanks for reading :)

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  3. sadiya15 March 2014 at 10:30

    waaaw swatz tmne toh ruladiya mjhe,,b4 I buy something I seriosly need to consider this,,blog post,,,,,,,, very well written swatz:-(

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    1. Swathi Shenoy15 March 2014 at 16:41

      Hehe thanks saddy :) N haan, agli baar hum dono jab bhi saath mein shopping karne jayenge, toh pakka is post ko yaad karenge :D

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  4. Anonymous15 March 2014 at 11:07

    What a very good lesson that we all could learn from. Great story.

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  5. Unknown15 March 2014 at 18:15

    Technically speaking ... You made long sentences to make a 5 sentence fiction :) but good work :D i can't even try that in 5 lines :P i did the same.. but not as 5 line fiction :D many lines :D

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    1. Swathi Shenoy15 March 2014 at 21:59

      Thanks shyam :-) well dats d whole point ;-) to make long sentences so to bring out more emotion in d story :-)
      Wil surely check out ur post :-)

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  6. Anonymous16 March 2014 at 20:18

    Amen. Often we become complacent. Well done.
    http://mcguffysreader.blogspot.com/2014/03/lucky.html

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  7. Shail18 March 2014 at 08:06

    That's a story with a message. Nicely done.

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    1. Swathi Shenoy18 March 2014 at 14:27

      Thank you shail mohan :-) keep coming along..

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